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【写作需求】
假定不久前你们学校为贫穷区域的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈悲行活动。请据此在拟定的方位上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某大学生英文报写一篇报导
，内容要害如下：
1. 意图：为贫穷区域的孩子们筹款
2. 10月23日，星期六
3. 途径：学校—市中心
4. 简况：学生把自个分红四人一组，启航前方案好了悉数，步行很艰苦，但活动进程中我们彼此协助，彼此撑持。究竟在许多人的协助下，
筹得善款5万多元。
5. 感触：每自个都很累，但都很高兴，因为…
留心：1. 报导须包括所给内容要害，需求语句通畅，意思联接;
2. 第5要害的内容须用至少2句话打开合理愿望，作恰当发扬;
3. 词数80个支配。
【优良满分范文】
Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.
We all felt
tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team
spirit.
