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文 | 刘晋荣 上海市川沙中学南校
It is shown in this line graph how many people in China are living below national poverty line (国度贫苦线). Overall, the number of population of the poor shows a decrease from 1978 to 2020. During that time, the number of Chinese people who live below national poverty line falls very quickly. However, from 2010 to 2020 the number of Chinese people living below the national property line drops a little slowly. As we can see Chinese poverty line adjusted (调解) for inflation (通货膨胀)grows marginally (稍微地)each year.
Therefore, the poverty population is inversely (相反地)proportional (成比例的)to the poverty line adjusted for inflation.
We can see in recent years, cadres (干部)who made great effort to alleviate (减轻)poverty worked a lot. They actively find the way for poor villagers to stay away from poverty. They spend all their time on poverty alleviation. They live and eat together with the villagers. Some even died of exhaustion (怠倦).
As an old saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” The good news is that, at the end of 2020, China has already eradicated (革除)absolute poverty.
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本文为利用文，文章采纳总-分-总布局，正确地总结了所给图表中的信息，表示了分歧时候段国度贫苦线的变革趋向和走向。末端总结全文，晋升文章立意，点了然国度扶贫事情的成果。
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