高中英语书面表达 精品 应用文之“通知”写作技巧

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应用文之“通知”写作技巧

◆通知的写法有两种,一种是以布告形式贴出,把事情通知给 有关人员,如学生、观众等,通常不用称呼;另一种是以书 信的形式,发给有关人员,此种通知写作形式同普通书信, 只要写明通知的具体内容即可。通知要求言简意赅、措辞得 当、时间及时。

◆布告形式的通知:通常此类通知上方正中写Notice或 NOTICE(通知),发出通知的单位的具体名称可放在正文前, 也可放在正文后,右下角处,发出通知的日期写在左下角处。

写作语料

一、常用词语

deliver/give a speech 发表演说

give a concert 举行音乐会

hold a meeting/celebration 举行会议/庆祝活动

attend a meeting/lecture/party 参加会议/讲座/晚会

set up a club 成立俱乐部

set out/off for…出发到……

show sb. around a place 带领某人参观

meet/gather at the gate of…在……的大门口集合

take part in/participate in 参加

二、常用句型

●There is going to be a lecture/talk on…

有一个关于……的演讲

●The meeting/activity will be held/is to be held in…

会议/活动将在……举行

●The party will begin at…and end at…

晚会将于……开始,在……结束

●The concert will begin at…and last…

音乐会将于……开始,持续……

●We are going to hold a discussion over…

我们将会就……展开讨论

●All the members are expected to attend it.

所有的成员都要出席。

●Anyone who is interested will be welcome.

欢迎任何感兴趣的人参加。

●You are required to take…with you.

你要随身携带……

●Please attend it/be there on time.

请准时出席/到那儿。

●Make sure that you…/Be sure to…确保……

真题热线

(2018年全国卷Ⅱ)

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大 家观看一部英语短片GrowingTogether。内容包括:

1.短片内容:学校的发展;

2.放映时间、地点;

3.欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

体裁和格式:应用文:通知

主体时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

中心人称:第一、二人称(兼用第三人称it)

写作要点:1.简单介绍短片内容;

2.仔细交代放
高中英语书面表达 精品 应用文之“通知”写作技巧插图
映时间、地点;

3.表达对短片的意见

学生习作得分__22__

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding①English short movie (1)about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.It is organized②by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interested③.(2)And every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments on it.

The Student Union

June 8, 2018

名师点评

失分诊断

本文结构完整,连接顺畅,行文流利,语言地道优美。考生 能在有限的时间里写出这样的作品,实属不易,难能可贵。

1.outstanding意为“杰出的;优秀的”时,常用来修饰人, 建议换为excellent。

2.It 所指不详,最好明确。前文中仅出现了主语“an outstanding English
高中英语书面表达 精品 应用文之“通知”写作技巧插图(1)
short movie”,但根据文意,应该非所指, 且movie 不能作organize的宾语。结合后文的“some relevant details about it”和“take part in it”可知,此处It应该指这次观 看短片的活动,即“the activity”。

3.结合文意及前面的meaningful可知,此处是指这部短片 “不仅很有意义,而且还很有趣”;而interested一般是指人 “对某物很感兴趣”,因此,此处应该用interesting。

打造靓点

1.请用非限制性定语从句修改第一处:

_____________________________________________________________

2.请用高级词汇修改第二处: _____________________________________________________________

参考答案

1.which is about our school

2.What's more, you are welcome to participate in it

参考范文

Notice

Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? Recently, an excellent movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful
高中英语书面表达 精品 应用文之“通知”写作技巧插图(2)
but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.What's more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

June 8, 2018

[对点集训]

(2019·山西八校第一次联考)

假定你叫李华,是班上的英语课代表。你班外教Peter因外出开会请你代他在班上发一个关于课后作业的英语通知,内容如下:

1.写一篇关于中国茶文化的短文;

2.同学间交换并修改错误;

3.作业上交的时间。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

[范文赏读]

Notice

Dear classmates,

Our teacher Peter is at a meeting,so he asked me to tell you about the writing assignment today. Here is something for your attention.

First of all ,the topic of our writing is about our Chinese tea culture based on the text we have just learnt. We are supposed to write the essay in about 100 words. Secondly,after finishing writing,we need to exchange it with our partners,and correct each other’s mistakes if any. Lastly,the deadline for handing our corrected essays in is this Friday morning.

Should you have any question about it,please don’t hesitate to ask me.

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