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Part A
47.
Directions:
Suppose
professor Smith asked you to plan a debate on the theme of city traffic. Write him an email to
1) Suggest a specific topic with your reasons, and
2) Tell him about your arrangements.
You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET.
Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
解析:
今年的英语二小作文又考察了书信的形式,还是在意料之中的。从历年来的考查形式来看:
无论是英语一还是英语二,小作文考查书信类和告示类两种。其中,从近年的考频来说,书信是考查的重点。在英语二中,小作文考查了10年,其中,9年都考查到了书信。但从内容来说今年的英语二的小作文有点难度。再次考察了介绍性的内容为主的信。英语二之前的小作文虽然考过介绍性的信,但都是内容相对单一的话题,如17年考察的介绍中国文化的演讲内容的介绍,这一次不仅有安排介绍,还要给出建议的主题和原因,内容比较多样,不像之前的建议话题那样单一。
写作时,按照一般顺序。第一段写过渡性内容和写信目的;第二段具体给出拟定的讨论话题并给出理由和讨论的安排;第三段表达客套性内容和期待。本文的三段内容可以这样安排:。一段中因为本文的收信人是教授,属于稍正式的信件,但毕竟是认识的人,所以在第一段就不写自我介绍了,表达很开心接到这个任务并会认真完成,之后说明写信目的。第二段具体给出一个讨论的主题并给出原因和安排。第三段表示希望对方给予建议并期待讨论会圆满举办。
另外,注意小作文的评分侧重点。考
研大纲指出:A 节作文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的个别关键词或词组,但使用提示语中出现过的句子将被扣分。这一点一定要引起重视!
范文:
Dear Prof.Smith,
I feel really delighted and honored to have the opportunity to suggest and plan a debate on the theme of city traffic, and I’m writing to contribute my personal view on this debate.
I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details. As for
the topic, I hold the opinion that we may focus on “Low-carbon Commuting”. Owing to the fact that the quality of air in our city is far from satisfying and most of us frequently experience traffic jam due to too many private car on the road, it is environment-friendly to choose those clean-energy vehicles and public transportation. The debate will explore some specific effective measures to achieve low carbon transport. Participants can be divided into two groups to present their view alternatively and the one contribute more appealing means will be the winner and awarded prizes.
Those two aspects are what I would like to emphasize, and I would like to know of your opinions on this and I wish you could give me some further ideas on it. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming