2021年考研英语二写作试题解析(石家庄新东方)

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Part A

47. Directions:

Suppose you are organizing an online meeting, write an email to Jack, aninternational student,

1) invite him to participate;

2) tell him about the details.

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end. Use “Li Ming” instead.

You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

Under the threat of COVID - 19, we have to hold our Academic ExchangeMeeting online this semester. So, I am writing to invite you to attend themeeting and introduce the key points concerned.

The meeting, which will be held at 9:00 a.m. on October 11 through thesoftware of Tencent Meeting, is aimed to share your

achievements and improveyour abilities in Chinese culture studies. In that case, you are supposed todownload the app in advance and enter the meeting room 15 minutes earlier thatday. Besides, it is advisable for you to prepare a presentation with three keypoints, including your findings, difficulties you can not solve by yourself aswell as your future plan on the next topic.

I would like to meet you online and please let me know your decision,whether you could join us or not. And I am ready to answer any question you mayhave.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

根据关键词email，可以判断本篇应用文应为书信格式，是应用文最常考察的一种体裁;再根据关键词invite，可确定其类型为邀请信;题目背景为“我”将要组织一场线上会议，邀请国际生Jack来参加，并告诉他一些细节。题目阅读难度不高，考生需要注意文章内容应该涵盖邀请和细节介绍，从而保证内容全面。最后，语言表述应尽可能详细具体，还原真实场景。

具体写作思路如下：

第一段简要介绍举办线上会议的原因，即受新冠疫情的影响;然后表达写作目的，即邀请Jack参加会议，并向他介绍一些注意事项。

第二段平行展开，先介绍本次会议的举办时间及采用的会议软件，然

后提醒Jack提前下载腾讯会议软件，并于会议当天提前十五分钟进入会议室;最后，说明Jack应该提前准备发言内容，内容包含学习收获、遇到的困难以及对下一个论题的计划。

第三段表明期待Jack的参与，若有疑问，可回复询问。

Part B

48. Directions:

Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

【参考范文】

As is manifestly presented in the column chart above, there are somedifferences in respect of residents’ exercising modes in a certain city.Specifically speaking, roughly half of the citizens would love to take exerciseby themselves or with their friends, accounting for 54.30% and 47.70%respectively. By comparison, taking exercise with families takes up just overone in five, followed by having physical training through group activities,which occupies 15.80% and is the last pattern people would choose.

Why more citizens prefer to take exercise alone or with partners? Severalprimary causes could be summarized as follows. First and foremost, with moreyoung people working in cities that they are not familiar with, they have littlechance to go out with their families or relatives. A recent report published bythe state media indicates that roughly 68% of graduates would stay in the samecity where they accept college education instead of going back to theirhometown. Besides, the high working pressure thatconfronts young generations isanother significant factor that can not be ignored. In order to get relaxed,more staff intend to get rid of their working surroundings so they are used tolistening to music or chatting with close friends while running or walking.

Given the analysis above, it is obvious that this scenario reflected in thechart will sustain in the years to come. It is high time that departmentsconcerned should pay attention to it.

【解析】

本次英语二继续以图表形式考察学生写作能力，图表类型为条形图，但数据四种不同锻炼方式的占比，因此，应利用静态描述句型进行分析。标题内容中的“某市居民”曾在英语二2015年大作文进行过考察，“锻炼”这一单词为基础词汇，因此，本篇作文整体难度不大。

具体写作思路如下：

第一段，描述图表：独自锻炼和与朋友一起锻炼相差不多，约占一半，归在一句话内进行描述;接下来说明与家人一起锻炼约占五分之一，占比最少的是通过团体活动进行锻炼。

第二段，分析原因：导致这种现象的原因主要有两个方面。第一，许多居民不是本土市民，因此，很难有机会与家人或亲属一同锻炼，接着利用数字举例的论证方法，适当虚拟数据，表明很多大学生毕业后会留在当地，而不是返回家乡;第二，由于工作压力大，很多员工更倾向于在锻炼时远离工作环境，希望在跑步或散步时听听音乐或与好朋友聊

天。

第三段，总结升华：这种现象在未来几年还会持续，相关部门应该引起关注。