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新题审理（人物、地址）
1、 does a good job 作业极好薪水很高/作业做得好√
2、 often travel by plane 的理由有啥——脑筋风暴（最佳选择非名人和非在飞机上作业的人）
3、 female 最佳选择一般人和身边的人
4、 famous in history 从迩来的阅历去发掘
5、 school in childhood→Legally, a person is a child until age 18 in the United States.
6、 a city went with family可以把要点放在family
7、 a place read and write图书馆、咖啡厅、自习室
8、 a place full of colors找自个了解的当地把颜色杰出（有哪些颜色，来自哪，带来的感触）
9、 new public place新的和旧的有啥不一样
阐明题-人物题、地址题、物品题
特征：Describe a noun＋定语从句/描述词
示例：Describe a school in your childhood
×差错示例：
My school is in…
It is big and beautiful.
The teaching building has three floors.
On the ground floor there is a reception.
On the second floor there is a lab and several classrooms.
…
讲不到两分钟而且没有本质内容非常无聊
√正确示例：
特征：I’d like to tell you about my primary school. It's a public school in my area.
途径：The reason why I went to that school was because I lived nearby. According to the regulations in my city, children should go the nearest primary school unless you take a private one. So I went to this school.
外在：This school is actually very big compared with any other primary schools. There are…and…
内在：Apart from the facilities, the courses and teachers also left me a deep impression, for example we learned.. and I was very little at that time, I didn’t…but my teacher didn't…
评价：So I think it's lucky for me to spend my childhood there because I was allowed to do many activates and I was given many chances to deliver public speeches. All of these had great influence on me and made who I am.
五环大法
属渠外内评
实操运用）
1、 Describe a person who often travels by plane
You should say
Who the person is
How you knew him/her
Where he or she goes
Why he or she travels by plane
特征: Elisabeth, mid 20s, data analysist
途径: friend from uni
外在: marathons, fit
内在: world competitions, overseas, adventurous
评价: hobby, high level, break, memory
特征: Okay I'd like to tell you about a person who I know travels a lot by plane. Her name's Elisabeth and she’s a young lady in her mid-twenties. She’s actually a data analysist so she's travelling for something else, not her job.
途径: I know her very well because she’s a friend from university. We often hung out at that time so I know almost everything about her quite well.
外在: she’s very into marathons, like, running for a deadly long distance and make a breakthrough for herself. I mean, it's really a good hobby even though I'm not able to follow. And she is very fit because of the marathon and she’s able to travel a lot for this sport.
内在: so basically every year, she takes two competitions in different countries, like, last year it was in France and Britain and this year she wants to attend the one in Shanghai so she’s coming for it this autumn. So she got loads of opportunities fly overseas and she takes them as interesting and fun experiences instead of something tiring and exhausting-so I'll say she’s pret
ty adventurous and full of energy really.
评价: I’m happy for her that she’s taken her hobby to such a high level. And every time she flies overseas, it's also a time for her to have a break from job. So I guess it must be really fun and she must have had loads of memories to recall.
2、Describe a place you remember well that is full of colours
You should say
Where it is
What it is like
What it is used for
And explain why you remember it well.
属: carnival, uni, November
渠: 4 times, bonfire, festival
外: rides- shop-dress-firework
内: enjoy, play, dance, upset, firework
评: colourful, happy memory
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