- A+
With the development/introduction…, xxx, the xxx, are more and more +adj/become adj increasingly. Xxx often face the dilemma of whether to vt …… with allaspects carefully considered, I believe that……/ I think to vt what would be abetter choice.
B.在往常日子中,有许多值得咱们去揣摩判另外疑问。就像咱们看到上文作者提出的疑问时,你会如何认为?(有的人认为……;也有的人认为……;)就我的经历而言,如下的思考方向使得我认为……。(中文文字来自太傻)
In daily life /during our life, so many problems are worth consideringcarefully. As what has been come up with, when you face/when it comes to /thereis a public debate today that/recently the problem has been brought into focusthat… ……what is your choice and what is your opinion? Some hold the viewthat/some think………..while the others believe that………. However, with all aspectscarefully considered, I believe that……………
琐细的语句:A is a common way of ….., but is it a wise one? Some people hold thedifferent view……
C. (excellent) 假定发现可以用到反问排比就这样套句,条件是你的比方满足多,脑筋风暴用的又好又快。
Have you ever been to ……/have you ever +曩昔分词/received/faced/experienced……
If you had never had these experiences, you would never know/ feel/ learn/realize/ understand……+how much fun/interesting/significant……xxx could bringyou.
2. 正文写作(body)
A类 第一段
最初中心句多用when vt+ed with xxx, ……(成果)/when taking xxx as……+(成果)。这个成果就是本段的中心。(留心主题避免过细否则下面不好写)
其他最初:Nowadays there is a growing awareness that…
It is time we explore the truth of
然后举例选不一样的人物 例如equipped with xxx, a student may+vt/ a researcher may/ ateacher may
中心穿插比按例如 which, if done with xxx(敌对方)/which, if completed with xxx/if takenby, may well need/cost/waste much time/money/vigor/energy……多用比照级比照
。When it comesto the condition that… xxx is more adj/better… than…
The advantages for A outweigh than B when sth is concerned/when we consider…
The advantages of A outweigh that of B when……………
段尾重申主题。实际上是换个视点和说法,with the development of xxx,such as increase of………., thecondition can be 被逼/ more adj, whereas +正本条件的捆绑或敌对面的缺乏。
第二段
………….but that is only part of the reality, another equally important aspectis………
A is but one of the many effects, another is…………
Another advantage of choosing A is obviously seen when you…….
Besides, other reasons are……..
在期间中的承受:
what is more, furthermore, besides, also……….
For instance, such as, a good case in point is… a particular example forthis is……….(这些我们都晓得的,就不再赘述了,都有点厌烦了,吼吼)
更高档的承受:
suppose/imagine that…(自界说类常常用到,我们可以领会)
just imagine what it would be like if……
it is reasonable to expect….
it is not surprising that……
no wonder that……...
更多的主题最初
in fact, xxx is the reader’s major concern
unlike xxx, xxx2(同谓语), aaa may vt
今后几段少写一些
最终一个例子段的最初:the last but not the least………..
在期间中的自问自答可以有用地证明自个的观念。
Why……The answer to this problem involves many factors. The first reason canbe obviously seen
Most people would agree that…. Some people may neglect that…. infact……other suggest that……
Part of explanation is ………
过渡段(A类可以没有或很少假定你在每个段子中都又比照,B类(见下)=让步段)
假定段与段都是同一个观念:to understand the truth of…., it is also important tosee…..
what is more, a study of …..will make this point clearer
假定咱们转到另一方说敌对面地利益:certainly/of course, xxx has its own advantages, suchas……..+however,+ 我的观念
I do not deny that xxx has its own merits such as … but…
Admittedly…xxx also play an important role in ……..
B类 其他规划及应急办法
假守时刻不可用(最初用了过多时刻例如跨越7分钟了)
咱们不必避忌first/for one thing, second/also, third/what is more
咱们先列出三个利益,在最终写出敌对方的缺乏
例如:of course, xxx give us/ bring us………….说一些敌对方的利益。在结束究竟敲定你的观念也不迟。例如But , asxxx, we should / do not /we hadbetter.总之,咱们的结束就像是在画一道九曲十8弯的江水(说得有点夸大),但究竟她是要流向大海的。
3 结束(A类=让步+结论 B类=结论)
A类中的让步相同可以这样:of course, xxx give us…/ xxx, certainly, has its ownmerits/advantages. 后边 + 一大堆“一句话比方”。最终however, for xxx, xxx, equipped with moremerits like ……can be more reasonably treated as a wiser choice./I thereforereinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)
B类中只需结论:必定是转机最初but ,as xxx, we had better……记住不必定用啥to sum up/inconclusion……有时分一个转机词更能体现显着的逻辑联络,用另外反而迷糊了。这样咱们的B类的最终两段就别离结束了让步和结论的功用。
当然,假定你没有时刻了,我这儿相同有紧迫方案,而且作用相同极好。
这样地结束只需两个有些:in conclusion/ to sum up/in summery/from what has beendiscussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…/it is wiser… xxx hasmore/better(比照级), I hence/therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as thefinal choice for…我测了一下时刻,大约可以在一分钟之内搞定结束。(旁白:不就是背么?!唉唉唉。)
二、比照类 (两种事物或一个事物的两种情况比照advantage and disadvantage)
最初:同上,不过可以不写观念:(咱们加一种经典最初写观念的)since the announcement of xxx to doxxx(university’s plan to develop a new center), many people have showed theirconcern for the project and expressed their views of xxx. ………… it is clear thatthe diversified views have converged to two: …… Now that we have to make adecision, I think we should choose the latter without hesitation. / But Iprefer……..
中心:as everybody knows, ……………in short,……………..
there are several reasons.
first of all
the second
the third
the reasons above may can answer why I prefer to ……..
结束:because of the above reasons, I strongly recommend that we ……
不写观念的最初( 很普便,建议!!!):some people like ……while others……often It depends onthe……Those who……will choose/like …… They like ……will prefer…….
然后分类陈述利益
倒数第二段就要初步驳论,说出你选择的具有更多的利益:some people would say that……然后根据这个驳论他。就是自个立个靶子打。
结束和其他的纷歧样了,要留心一向两端说,并可以有也可以没有自个的倾向。Both ……and …….. are………and both are………..I prefer………because………but people will make the choice that fit their lifestylebest.
我们都晓得,比照类和敌对类差异不大,所以看看敌对类的根柢上两种就都能掌控。不过要留心的是,这两品种型的文章
假定没提点敌对面或其他选择(包括让步),是不可以能上4分的。 (from redrock)
三、自界说类(自个的观念imagine…… , why do you think……how can……)
自个认为自界说类是更安适一些,所早年面的模板天然可以沿用,不过,安适就需要咱们预备更多的比方和更利于写作的选择。比方疑问问你最期望见的前史人物,最情愿回到曩昔哪个当地哪个时分,问你家里的哪个空间在你看来最重要……最佳把一切的标题都想一遍,假守时刻紧,也要把自界说类的好好想想,未雨绸缪。
以上模板来自一些可靠范文,经自己收拾后得到。最终期望我们从这张帖子中各取所需,自己井蛙之见,不免有不当之处,期望我们及时提出或发短信给我,我会及时改正。
仅以此篇怀念上一界托福斑竹小狐狸Helen
祝她在UA安好
The son of CRI
Sebastian King
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