2点教你写好最初段,托福独立写作不凉凉!

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2点教你写好最初段,托福独立写作不凉凉!

在托福写作的课堂上,关于如何写独立写作的最初段是每位同学在第一节课上都会遇到的疑问。

当被问到这个疑问的时分,许多同学的第一反应是最初段还不简略吗?可是真的要操练起来,这个“简略”的疑问却显得不那么“简略”了。

那下面是咱们总结同学们在写最初段会呈现的较杰出的两大类疑问:

1. 基础较好的同学最初段倾向于写得内容很凌乱、许多。

2. 一般基础不太好的同学最初段写得又过分于简略。

这样写最初段的话,都晦气于拿高分,咱们就拿TPO 42 的独立写作来看:

TPO 42

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A 同学是这样写最初段的:

Working, the only method to earn money, plays an increasingly momentous role in our daily life. When it comes to the issue about which type of task is more satisfied, it has arouse extensive attention of the society, which thus triggered a storm of argument. People's opinion differ from person to person, and culture to culture. Some might highly prefer to finish various kind of work, while others may strongly choose the job with some similarity on the contrary. As for me, I absolutely support the prior one mainly contributing to the following reasons.

B 同学是这样写的最初段:

I agree with the second opinion.

那么A同学和B同学的最初段写道别离呈现了啥疑问呢?

首要,A 同学的最初段写了将近100个单词,并不是说最初段字写多了不好,而是同学们要思考到考试时刻(30 分钟)对错常有限的,因为咱们除去构思和写完之后回头做查看,剩下的写作时刻只是只需25分钟支配了而已。

而且,在独立写作的评分里,最初段和结束段必需要有,可是咱们评分的要点是看主体段。

所以一般来说,比照合理的写作组织时刻是把
2点教你写好最初段,托福独立写作不凉凉!
30 分钟的时刻各分配2分钟到最初段和结束段去。如此看来2分钟打100个单词支配是极端困难的,所以这就是最初段像A 同学写得这么凌乱冗长的,一般反映的疑问就是不可时刻写完一篇无缺的作文。

还有一个疑问是:写这么长,给考官的感触是很冗长、不简练,且写得繁琐,考生比照简略犯一些初级的语法差错,比方A 同学的最初段就呈现了好几处小语法差错,这会给考官带来不好的形象,直接会拉低考生的分数。

其次,B 同学写得过分于简略了,即直接给出了情绪说撑持第二点,给考官的感触就是一头雾水、不明就里。

所以如何写好独立写作的最初段呢?在我看来,就是简略的两点即可:改写标题+ 自个的情绪(经过改写标题引出论题,告诉考官咱们在谈论一个怎样的论题,再给出自个的情绪是啥,这样写才更有逻辑性。)

写最初段可套用的句式有:

a. People are often involved in a heated debate about whether…+ 无缺的语句

b. There exists a heated debate about whether …+ 无缺的语句

举个比方:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research. (2012-12-18)

咱们可以先思考标题中哪些当地可以进行替换。

比方:

The main role 可改写成 the prior mission /priority

A university professor 可改写成 educationist

Educate 换成 teach

Do research 换成 conduct/perform investigations

再套进句式,最初段就出来了:

People, especially the students and educationalists are often involved in a discussion about whether the priority of a college professor is to teach students or conduct investigations. As for me, the answer is the latter one.

给出情绪的时分直接用代词former/latter one, 就不必在标明自个情绪的时分再改写一次了,这样既保证了正确,又节约了时刻,而且能给考官一望而知、简练的感触。

最初段给考官一个好的形象,天然愈加有利于考试在写作方面拿下高分,期望同学们能在看似简略的最初段下功夫,作用会事半功倍。

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